literature

Breathe again

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Literature Text

I try so hard-
you have no idea
but it hurts too much-
my lungs are gone-
vanished, removed.

I tried so hard-
you have no idea
but you hurt me so much-
my heart is broken
peices, dismembered.

I try so hard
you have no idea
but the memories hurt too much
my air doesnt come-
i'll never breathe again.
number 10 for the chaLONGE, tell me what u think
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DarkIgnis's avatar
wow..... this is just....wow...
my goodness! your going to surpass me my little puppy!

your talent is growing soo fast!