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Don’t waste your words on me
Because I know better than to listen
Don’t look at me like that
Because I know your eyes are trying to tell me that it’ll be alright

Don’t touch my hand so gently
Because it sends chills up and down my spine
Don’t expect me to understand
Because I am still so confused

Don’t say my name
Because it is to soiled for your wonderful voice
Don’t tell me you love me
Because I want to believe you so much it hurts

Don’t smile at me
Because my heart beats faster when you do
Don’t miss me when you go
Because I’m not good enough for you to miss

Don’t tell me goodbye
Because I will not respond
Don’t ask me why you should go
Because I don’t have a good reason for you to leave.
©2008-2010 ~SoLong-NotGoodNight
:iconsolong-notgoodnight:

Author's Comments

hmmm...ending is a little iffy, but tell me what u think. ive been recently doing a lot of poems that repeat in each stanza, all going back to the same message, but idk if ill post any of those.... they rnt really all that...goooodddd....

well yeah. tell me what u think and if u have requests for songs/poems u want me to write...or ideas, cuz i always need those, too!!

i love you guys!

~Taylor~

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:iconfireonh2o:
Once again, freaking awesome. Let's do this! Maybe on Friday you can help me write some patterened poems- mine are all open right now, and that style looks interesting. I'll do a little of both. Can't wait till Fri.!

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Somtimes, nothing's enough.
:icongoddessegold123:
omg! i officialy love you! forever and ever and ever! this is amazing!
:iconsolong-notgoodnight:
THX! i love you forever too!!!!

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I love Paramore ♥

Oh ur a naughty girl! u need a spanking! ...ugh that got gross. --Me

Check out my stuffs...[link] :)

Love me hate me, you'll never break me...unless you do....
:icongoddessegold123:
hahaha. keep the great poems comin!
:iconariana654:
:clap: I like it alot. :)

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I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaack!

forgivey our enemies, it messes with thier heads.

let's cross that imagainary bridge when we get there....

evil, embrace it. :evillaugh:
:iconsolong-notgoodnight:
thx! it means a lot to me that u ...like it!

:P

--
I love Paramore ♥

Oh ur a naughty girl! u need a spanking! ...ugh that got gross. --Me

Check out my stuffs...[link] :)

Love me hate me, you'll never break me...unless you do....
:iconariana654:
aw, that's mean....

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I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaack!

forgivey our enemies, it messes with thier heads.

let's cross that imagainary bridge when we get there....

evil, embrace it. :evillaugh:
:iconsolong-notgoodnight:
whats mean?

--
I love Paramore ♥

Oh ur a naughty girl! u need a spanking! ...ugh that got gross. --Me

Check out my stuffs...[link] :)

Love me hate me, you'll never break me...unless you do....
:iconariana654:
oh, um...
kicking someones head in...




(had a type 'O' b4..)

--
I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaack!

forgivey our enemies, it messes with thier heads.

let's cross that imagainary bridge when we get there....

evil, embrace it. :evillaugh:

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