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Gently
i rock back and forth and
softly
rain falls on my roof
i remeber a time
when it was you and i who were in love
and i belived the lie

how could i forget?
the thought of your eyes?
staring me down, staring me down
telling me im wrong

Gently
you'll kiss her good night and
softly
she'll kiss you back
still i remeber a time
when it was you and i who were in love
how i belived your lies

how could i forget?
the thought of your eyes?
staring me down, staring me down
telling me im wrong

how im so, how im so, how im so wrong...
how im so wrong...
for telling you goodbye....
©2008-2010 ~SoLong-NotGoodNight
:iconsolong-notgoodnight:

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i wrote this forever ago, tell me what u think

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:icongoddessegold123:
this is soooo beyond amazing!
so many people can relte to this.
this is my new favorite!!!
completely!
:heart:

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~Snarky!!! yeah...google that shit~
~So im a little crazy, whats ur point?~
~Wow, that was the most amazing akward silence ever!~
~I dont get white crayons...what do they want from us?~
~Dear cupid, we need to talk about ur aim.~
:iconsecretly-n-danger:
.....wow...Taylor! thats....AmAzInG!!!
:heart:

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True love finds a way.....
:iconsolong-notgoodnight:
thaaanks

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I love Paramore ♥

Oh ur a naughty girl! u need a spanking! ...ugh that got gross. --Me

Check out my stuffs...[link] :)

Love me hate me, you'll never break me...unless you do....
:iconsolong-notgoodnight:
ohh!! thank you thank you!!

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I love Paramore ♥

Oh ur a naughty girl! u need a spanking! ...ugh that got gross. --Me

Check out my stuffs...[link] :)

Love me hate me, you'll never break me...unless you do....
:iconsecretly-n-danger:
welcomes. :)

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True love finds a way.....
:icongoddessegold123:
:)

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~Snarky!!! yeah...google that shit~
~So im a little crazy, whats ur point?~
~Wow, that was the most amazing akward silence ever!~
~I dont get white crayons...what do they want from us?~
~Dear cupid, we need to talk about ur aim.~
:iconfireonh2o:
:glomp: That's so touching, so beautiful.

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Somtimes, nothing's enough.
:iconsolong-notgoodnight:
thankss

--
I love Paramore ♥

Oh ur a naughty girl! u need a spanking! ...ugh that got gross. --Me

Check out my stuffs...[link] :)

Love me hate me, you'll never break me...unless you do....
:iconfireonh2o:
:highfive:

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Somtimes, nothing's enough.

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